Were you looking for suggestions for this particular piece, or suggestions for future youth illustrations and comics?
For this piece, I might suggest zooming out a little bit and framing the two characters with a third skeleton-guy in the foreground. Just to drill into the viewer's mind that they're being surrounded? ('Cause I assume that's what's happening here.) Also: you may want to move the girl's hand a bit. It's a little too close to the guy's crotch there. XD
As to other suggestions for future pieces? Um... I can't think of any right now. Sorry! =(
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Date: 2010-11-11 02:23 am (UTC)It's just a happy noise.
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Date: 2010-11-11 02:24 am (UTC)For this piece, I might suggest zooming out a little bit and framing the two characters with a third skeleton-guy in the foreground. Just to drill into the viewer's mind that they're being surrounded? ('Cause I assume that's what's happening here.)
Also: you may want to move the girl's hand a bit. It's a little too close to the guy's crotch there. XD
As to other suggestions for future pieces? Um... I can't think of any right now. Sorry! =(
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Date: 2010-11-14 03:55 am (UTC)LOL, I kid. That is where my mind went when I saw this piece. :DD
And I use my Mordecai icon because I lurve him, sociopathic murdering kitty that he is...
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