Haha. Excellent. Although man, Lina was over reacting over a kiss. I mean, it's not like she's never seen people kissing before, right? Maybe it was my pervy mind but the whole "whating" line had me thinking something else was happening. Although I guess the angle she saw it from, she could of misconstrued it.
Although with the door locked...you know...to pass the time...
The idea is that Lina saw something she pictured being more then what it truly was. It's not the kiss itself, but rather the position, that threw her off. I wanted both Lina and the reader to think something sexchay was going down in the kitchen. There will be a link with the rest of the plot, so read on ^^
Yeah, that was me being stupid by not letting the scene sink in when I was writing the comment. Hence, right at the end, mentioning that Lina could have misconstrued the situation. I tend to do that alot! It's a hazard of mine in examinations.
It makes the whole thing all the more funnier. I'm just being slow! ^^. Gourry is rubbing off on me!
no subject
Date: 2006-10-27 05:30 pm (UTC)Although with the door locked...you know...to pass the time...
no subject
Date: 2006-10-27 10:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-10-27 10:33 pm (UTC)It makes the whole thing all the more funnier. I'm just being slow! ^^. Gourry is rubbing off on me!